Concert

Concert

A Poem by sarah

I went to a concert tonight
It was amazing
The energy of the crowed
Just carried you away

The cold breeze from the ocean
Blew through
Like a wonderful blanket
Of life

The music blasted so loud
I had to scream
Just to hear the sound
Of my own voice

Everyone that surrounded me
Had a look of pure contentment
Like even though life may suck
In that moment

Life was good

The slow music started
People swayed
And let the sound
Just wash over them like a tidal wave

The music stirred up deep emotion
You just could help
But dance
To the beautiful music

And ya know something? 
In that moment
Even though life kinda sucks
In that moment

Life was good
Real good....

© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
Went to a concert today at the Ventura County Fair it was AMAZING! and I had to write this.

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Nice poem. Yeah, concerts are supposed to do that. music drowns all our worries/problems away.. We're at the beat, rhythm, flow, sound of the music.. it makes us feel we're in an alternate world. Well, it can at times. ^-^
Thats good you had a fun time. =) WHOO! Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is awesome! I do hope my concert experience is as good as yours seemed to be! Wonderful poem! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A most positive and daring prose, well pened, good read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Uplifting.. I like this write..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice
I felt like I was there
Live music affects me

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem. Yeah, concerts are supposed to do that. music drowns all our worries/problems away.. We're at the beat, rhythm, flow, sound of the music.. it makes us feel we're in an alternate world. Well, it can at times. ^-^
Thats good you had a fun time. =) WHOO! Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Music is very powerful. Allow us to escape to a better place. I'm glad you had a good time. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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