Concert

Concert

A Poem by sarah

I went to a concert tonight
It was amazing
The energy of the crowed
Just carried you away

The cold breeze from the ocean
Blew through
Like a wonderful blanket
Of life

The music blasted so loud
I had to scream
Just to hear the sound
Of my own voice

Everyone that surrounded me
Had a look of pure contentment
Like even though life may suck
In that moment

Life was good

The slow music started
People swayed
And let the sound
Just wash over them like a tidal wave

The music stirred up deep emotion
You just could help
But dance
To the beautiful music

And ya know something? 
In that moment
Even though life kinda sucks
In that moment

Life was good
Real good....

© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
Went to a concert today at the Ventura County Fair it was AMAZING! and I had to write this.

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Nice poem. Yeah, concerts are supposed to do that. music drowns all our worries/problems away.. We're at the beat, rhythm, flow, sound of the music.. it makes us feel we're in an alternate world. Well, it can at times. ^-^
Thats good you had a fun time. =) WHOO! Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I've been to a few concerts (all free, and thankfully, all Christian metal). The emotions they cause are powerful! I feel so great, so amazing after a concert!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Watch out for music, it can bring on strange emotions, which you capture in your poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like how music can be escapism for some people too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These are the snippets that I like to mine for details. You did a superb job with this:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Writing for pleasure and for pain is very theraputic even when it doesn't need to be. This is a great and fun write. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great concert, beautiful composing....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Music is a power vastly underestimated in this society I think--congrats on a great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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It sounded fun, I loved it. Great write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is awesome!
I've never been to a concert x.x
so yea, but I would like to go to one ! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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