Dear Mr. Dream man

Dear Mr. Dream man
I wish to hold you tightly
I wish to make the pain of this world
Seem almost nonexistent

Dear Mr. Dream man
I wake up every morning
Wondering
If today will be the day we meet

Dear Mr. Dream man
I want to hold your hand
And take a walk on a cool
Summer night and listen to the crickets chirp

Dear Mr. Dream man
Have I already met you?
I wonder
Do I know you now?

Dear Mr. Dream man
I wish to kiss you goodnight
And good morning
Everyday for the rest of my life

Dear Mr. Dream man
Come and find me soon
Because i'll be waiting
With bated breath....

Author's Note

idk

Reviews

[Calypso]

I like this. Often dreams are better then real life.

[Lime-Eater]

I bet almost every girl/woman (including me) can realate to this. Just waiting for the perfect guy to come along. Amazing write! Love it! :)

[quinfinn]

can't help thinking of that old song by the chordettes "mr. sandman". this is a wonderful, whimsical and lovely write.

[Kesha]

Stunningly beautiful! I really enjoyed this poem! ^-^

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong and positive poem. Sometime better to allow time to allow things to fall into place. I believe woman have the power. They decide when a man can get in and be part of their life. A man can try to force himself in. Woman can be stubborn and block the door. A like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sunflower 20]

beautiful! i love the emotions and imagry that you have created, very well done :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Fantastic..!!!

[Jeff]

Very good poem.

[Vanessa Rico]

Dont we all wish we had a Mr. Dream Man! Beautifully written!