glance

How do you make me feel so small
So useless
So alone

With a simple glance

Author's Note

not good at Hiku's but this is all I was really feeling and all I could say.

Reviews

[Calypso]

I love how simple Haiku s are. I don't think how good this Haiku is can be judged by such measures of grammar and vocabulary. I'm not saying the grammar was incorrect or that your vocabulary is small. What I'm saying is what really matters is how you feel after writing this.

[Linear]

A glance can and often does say so much, it may convey, love or lust, hatred and disgust, it can make one swoon os feel ten feet tall but also feel so very small....and that is just so sad :O(

[KAREN]

Very good! All said in a few words! Simple, but well written!

[Robin]

you expressed the feeling perfectly .

[Sunflower 20]

This has a strong meaning with short simple words. I really like how the entire poem leaves you wondering about that one question of a single glance. Powerful work. It also illustrates that sometimes the best way to tell a story is through the shitest way possible. Well done :D

[Cynthia]

Short and simple, but very straightforward and clear to the message you want to give readers. Sometimes a glance its what brought us to hopeless, and it makes me think of how powerful our eyes can be :)
A strong poem as well, tells a complete story with four lines, 16 words.
Wonderful!