glance

How do you make me feel so small
So useless
So alone

With a simple glance

Author's Note

not good at Hiku's but this is all I was really feeling and all I could say.

Reviews

[Calypso]

I love how simple Haiku s are. I don't think how good this Haiku is can be judged by such measures of grammar and vocabulary. I'm not saying the grammar was incorrect or that your vocabulary is small. What I'm saying is what really matters is how you feel after writing this.

[Alicia Schroeder]

some people just have that cold stare.. it's alway's good to get feelings out, no matter how big or small..

[Coyote Poetry]

Those people who we want to impress can make us feel small with a disappointing look. In 16 words you wrote a amazing poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[JanieB]

Oh, the glance..? Very powerful!

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not sure if its a haiku - this is simple yet effect at conveying your feelings and that look that we have a given/received..the eyes always tell a different story...

[MandaBear]

simple and to the point

[Abbie]

you could probably make it a little longer and explan were you left off with a simple glance

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Like it..!!

[Alicia™]

Sigh, what such simple words can say.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

ouch, nice one. i liked it