My heart

My heart

A Poem by sarah

If I had to write about my heart
If I had to tell you how I truly felt
If you really wanted to know

I don't think I could tell you
Writing down my feelings
Writing down my heart
 It Can't be explained in a single piece of writing

With every poem I write
Every story I compose
Every word I speak

A part of my heart is in it
Parts of my soul
Parts of myself are put into it

I have loved and lost
I have felt joy
And I have felt pain

How can all the feelings that come with
All those experiences be explained
In one poem?

So here is a single piece of my heart
Just one thing you need to know
My heart is a sea of undiscovered things

I will spend the rest of my life
Putting my heart
Into everything I do


© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
This is for a contest

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Excellent write! Sounds real and heartfelt!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, nice. I love it. I wish I could do something this good. Hn. So~ true though. Inspirational.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem. I like how you described the emotion and desire of the heart. The ending is very good. A wise person is led by their heart and kindness. Not greed and self goals. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really lovely. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, thats amazing! I hope you can win the contest really much, its so wonderful! I love this poem since it talks about real lots of truth of this life, its sort of... pop up my head after I read this poem! Its interesting, REALLY

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done, girl! I am so proud of you, I enjoy watching your writing get better and better with each poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hey sarah....heart and soul would forever be undiscovered and enigmatic,true thoughts....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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