My heart
A Poem by
sarah
If I had to write about my heart If I had to tell you how I truly felt If you really wanted to know I don't think I could tell you Writing down my feelings Writing down my heart It Can't be explained in a single piece of writing With every poem I write Every story I compose Every word I speak A part of my heart is in it Parts of my soul Parts of myself are put into it I have loved and lost I have felt joy And I have felt pain How can all the feelings that come with All those experiences be explained In one poem? So here is a single piece of my heart Just one thing you need to know My heart is a sea of undiscovered things I will spend the rest of my life Putting my heart Into everything I do
© 2011 sarah
Author's Note
This is for a contest
Reviews
Excellent write! Sounds real and heartfelt!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow, nice. I love it. I wish I could do something this good. Hn. So~ true though. Inspirational.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow, nice. I love it. I wish I could do something this good. Hn. So~ true though. Inspirational.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A beautiful poem. I like how you described the emotion and desire of the heart. The ending is very good. A wise person is led by their heart and kindness. Not greed and self goals. A outstanding poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
A beautiful poem. I like how you described the emotion and desire of the heart. The ending is very good. A wise person is led by their heart and kindness. Not greed and self goals. A outstanding poem.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Really lovely. Well done.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Really lovely. Well done.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
wow, thats amazing! I hope you can win the contest really much, its so wonderful! I love this poem since it talks about real lots of truth of this life, its sort of... pop up my head after I read this poem! Its interesting, REALLY
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow, thats amazing! I hope you can win the contest really much, its so wonderful! I love this poem since it talks about real lots of truth of this life, its sort of... pop up my head after I read this poem! Its interesting, REALLY
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Nicely done, girl! I am so proud of you, I enjoy watching your writing get better and better with each poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Nicely done, girl! I am so proud of you, I enjoy watching your writing get better and better with each poem.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
hey sarah....heart and soul would forever be undiscovered and enigmatic,true thoughts....
Posted 13 Years Ago
hey sarah....heart and soul would forever be undiscovered and enigmatic,true thoughts....
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 22, 2011
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sarah CA
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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books ..
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