My heart
A Poem by
sarah
If I had to write about my heart If I had to tell you how I truly felt If you really wanted to know I don't think I could tell you Writing down my feelings Writing down my heart It Can't be explained in a single piece of writing With every poem I write Every story I compose Every word I speak A part of my heart is in it Parts of my soul Parts of myself are put into it I have loved and lost I have felt joy And I have felt pain How can all the feelings that come with All those experiences be explained In one poem? So here is a single piece of my heart Just one thing you need to know My heart is a sea of undiscovered things I will spend the rest of my life Putting my heart Into everything I do
© 2011 sarah
Author's Note
This is for a contest
Reviews
Written with all the zeal of a true writer! Awesome work, Sarah! Just awesome! This piece flaunts the base essence of the written word. I loved it!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
very full of emotion
100/100
Posted 13 Years Ago
very full of emotion
100/100
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Oh, I just loved the ending! :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Oh, I just loved the ending! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Well this is one fine piece of a young womans heart, written so beautifully it touched me. Great poetry Sarah
Posted 13 Years Ago
Well this is one fine piece of a young womans heart, written so beautifully it touched me. Great poetry Sarah
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautifully written
Posted 13 Years Ago
Beautifully written
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wonderful write..!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wonderful write..!!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very beautifully stated!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very beautifully stated!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I think this sums up your life perfectly.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I think this sums up your life perfectly.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Excellent beautiful work! It should win a ribon in my book!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Excellent beautiful work! It should win a ribon in my book!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
this is very beautiful! i love the way you expressed the complexity of the heart. well done!
Posted 13 Years Ago
this is very beautiful! i love the way you expressed the complexity of the heart. well done!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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sarah CA
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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books ..
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