Lost

I don't know what to do anymore
I am so confused
And lost

I stand in the rain
Reaching up to heaven
With one simple question

Am I supposed to stay?
Should I try to make things better?
Should I try again?

I am so lost
Tears fill my eyes
And I fall to my knees

He broke my heart
I turned my back
And ran away

I cried all the tears
And I felt release
I felt freedom

But I keep coming back....

What am I supposed to do?
If I where meant to stay
Wouldn't have their been some sort of sign

Tears run down my face
Hopelessness fills my heart
Pain washes over me

I said my goodbyes
I forgot the pain
I released myself from everything

But it doesn't feel right
And so I sit
Alone
Completely lost 

So as I sit here
I look up at heaven
And scream

IF I WAS MEANT TO STAY WHY CAN'T YOU SIMPLY TELL ME SO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Note

This is a ranting/rambling poem. I am going through some stuff in my head, a little confusion. let me know what you think

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to get lost and feel not needed. Life is a wild field trip. We will have many good days and many bad days. We must get up from the bad days and go forward. Make the good day last as long as possible. A excellent poem with many questions.
Coyote

[Greg Skura]

:)

[OT]

everyone feels lost at times - but you'll learn to get back on track at some point!

[Akshat♥]

Feeling of loss is so painful...
but come over it..is what makes you strong
sometimes things doesn't work out right..
don't blame yourself ffor this
life is hard...don't be confused
try hard..
good poem:)

[Dushyant Thadani]

This is the same feeling I was in at one point of time. Just to see the one you love just go by is not easy. Great work penning down your emotions.

[Cynthia]

We all feel lost sometimes, it maybe hard to go through, but you can make it, find something you can place your heart on and try to find the target of your life, and then you will feel fine, you'll do.
I hope you will feel better soon :)
About the poem, its really powerfula nd strong the pain and anger can be feel easily in the poem, and the last line in all caps makes it a hit to us, it feels like hitting us just with a sentence, and its great!
Nice Job!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely write..!! At times, one goes through a real tough situation and do not know how to react..!!!

Fantastic..!!

Keep Sharing..!!!!