Rules to live by

Rules to live by

A Poem by sarah

Make every moment count
Never be anyone you aren't
live each moment like it's your last

Be as different as possible
And be glad of it
Normal people aren't worth mentioning

But the loons will be the ones
That will always be remembered

© 2011 sarah


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Don't become a loon for a wrong reason. It is cool to be different but sometime we must walk a line and do what we need to do. I agree with opening lines.
"Make every moment count
Never be anyone you aren't
live each moment like it's your last"
A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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please don't become a loon you will scare me lol great write



100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Gosh then I will be remembered :O) thank you Sarah

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written, I like those rules :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it. This poem was funny to me, the last part. GReat job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Everyone should have rules to live by. It makes the world a better place.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true... What I love most about this work is the honesty in it. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Coyote! Just be yourself and do it for you!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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LOL..you know it!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A funny poem that really made me laugh. It's so true what you wrote in this poem. This poem is excellent in the fact that it gets the point across with such few words. I really don't see how you could improve this poem. You did such a fantastic job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Fantastic...!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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