Fleeting

It only lasted for a moment
That feeling of love
And contentment

It only lasted for a second
That feeling of comfort
The feeling of peace

We were only in love for a moment
So fleeting
But so real

Puppy love
Indeed
The most innocent kind

We gave our heart to each other
Only for a moment
But I never wanted it to end

Pain was caused
Tears were spilled
Hearts were broken

But I wouldn't trade
That single moment
That you and I had

That moment may be gone now
But never forgotten

Author's Note

I'm a hopeless romantic and I have been feeling mushy hahaha maybe it's the spirit of v-day that's coming up idk

Reviews

[Geralyn Miller]

I am fairly cynical, and I loved it. You understand that some loves are fleeting, that is very wise, when a lifetime love comes along, and it will, you will be wise enough to recognize it.
Your poem is light, gentle, sweet and just the tiniest bit sad. Your choice of words sets the mood in the perfect way.

[JanieB]

I think we have probably all be there..

[Alicia™]

This is kind of cliche, but I like how you followed the story from the beginning to the end.

[Abbie]

good poem :)

100/100

[Marie Harrison]

Ah. sweet!

[Coyote Poetry]

Don't under-rate puppy love. Later maybe become more. A very good poem. We learn too late how youth and love are the best days of a life. I tell the young people. Enjoy being young. Old age bring few joys. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Linear]

Such a wonderful poem, of a love that will last forever in your heart. It's a love all who have ever loved will connect with

[Calypso]

Love sucks.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Sweet and cute piece of writing here..!!!!

KEEP MOVING..!!!!!

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

I am a hopeless romantic too I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! I am probably one of the most hopeless of romantics out there. This made me cry.... Excellent write and a favorite for my folder