truly

I wasn't pretending
Everything I said I meant
Everything I did was for you

Everything thing I did for you
I did because I cared
More then you will ever know

Every word I spoke
I said because all I ever wanted
Was to see you smile

You might have been pretending
I can't say
And I wouldn't even if I could

But if you ever wondered
If I really meant everything I did
And everything I said

I did....

You might have been pretending
And if you were
Fine

But don't you ever doubt
For a single moment
That I didn't mean it when I said for the first time

That I loved you
Because I did
I never pretended....

Author's Note

I meant to publish this before the other *sigh* oh well this was supposed to be "I meant it" but I lost it FOUND IT AGAIN! haha let me know what u think

Reviews

[Dushyant Thadani]

Well I just got to say that if you love the person the way you described in this poem, I don't think that any guy should be pretentious. But what you have written in this poem holds true for today's society. So I am disappointed to say that I am a part of this world, but I am happy to say that you've penned your feelings really well in here. Great job.

[Alicia™]

It's a cool poem! I think it's a little cliche, but it's good.

[Abbie]

this is wonderful


100/100

[Linear]

I think it's beautiful well expressed emotion, love is so often like that, you give it all, they take then cast you off, and you cant understand why, what you did wrong, when really you did nothing wrong at all

[Marie Harrison]

It's a wonderful poem. But love isn't about sacrifice. It's about making each other happy. You shouldn't be the only one giving. You deserve to have love equally returned.

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This is another great poem from you! Excellent Job!!!!!

[Calypso]

Well written. I know how you feel.

[GamingGal]

I've been in this position, of the last three stanzas. And for that reason, it leaves me mildly sad, and with no words to say.

Good job.

[Terra]

love

[HopelesslyDevoted]

yeah it kind of sounds like the other one that you just posted about innocent love.