My life as a movie

I feel like my life is a movie
everyday
New dialog is written
New characters are added

I watch the business on set
People doing everything they can
To make it all perfect

The sets are being made
The lines are being written
The story being told

This movie is my life
And yet I don't seem to have a role
A character
A place

I have no lines
I have no part
I have no place

I try to get someone
To listen
To understand
That this movie is my life

But no one can hear me
I scream
But they walk on by

No matter how hard I try
No one hears my screams
No one hears me

I feel like my life is a movie
But i'm not in it....

Author's Note

Just an idea

Reviews

[Chelsea]

Neat! I had a similar thought awhile ago. I tried to write a poem, but failed. I just couldn't write it in words this thought. You accomplished what I thought to the impossible, bravo!
I like it :) Very dark, but I can relate. My life feels like this movie, that doesn't end. The hurt, the pains, everything, just the same. Yet the movie keeps playing....
:)

[Undying Glory]

this was very great, i sure loved this one. this was very interesting and cuts real deep, with that feeling of always being left out. not being the main character of your own movie. that's very creative of you xD
"I try to get someone
To listen
To understand
That this movie is my life

But no one can hear me
I scream
But they walk on by

No matter how hard I try
No one hears my screams
No one hears me

I feel like my life is a movie
But i'm not in it...."
great work!!

[Alicia™]

That's a really great poem! I love the idea so much… I think I might try something like this. It's really a great concept.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Sometime in our life we can feel alone and forgotten. I like your story in the poem.
"I try to get someone
To listen
To understand
That this movie is my life"
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Abbie]

If there was ever a movie of your life i would definetly watch it." New dialouge,New characters. thats not life thats a perfect play.keep up the good work

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Absolute Truth...!!!!!

Good shot..!!!

[Jeff]

Great work! Very imaginative.

[Sweets]

Great write!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

very nice write

[KAREN]

This idea was great! Alot of people can relate to this, going through everyday life feeling like they are in a movie, but they can't find themselves!