I cried while I wrote this, it may not be my best but you can sure say a lot of emotion went into this. My ex's new girlfriend is posting everywhere how much she likes him how wonderful he is and he is saying how cute and awsome she is but when we were together we weren't even allowed to have the same facebook picture of him and me sitting together.
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I may say this alot of heart-wrenching poems such as this one but GUYS can be such IDIOTIC, DISILLUSIONED B******S sometimes.
They're unable to see the best things that ever happened to them and end up throwing them away. It's like trading Chocolate milk for Soy milk. No offense to those who prefer Soy milk.
Yes I know that not all guys are like this, but most of them are, and if you do meet a good one, he's either gay or taken.
But there's hope my friend, there always is. Make new friends, the love of your life might be the shy kid in your Science class.
And, speaking from experience, son't spend all your time thinking about him. Go out with friends, enjoy some ice-cream. Then one day, whenever that day may be, sit and reminisce. Think about all the good times. Get the closure you need. And you'll be able to move on, if you haven't already.
And I forgot to add this because of my advice and slight rant, this poem was one of the most amazing pieces of literature I have ever read. And that is definitely saying something.
One Million and Infinity x3 Stars ************************* etc.,etc.,etc.
This poem just adds to the boy topic. 98% of boys are B******S WHO TAKE US FOR GRANTED. The other 2% they're invisible.! So if you're trying to find a nice guy and not the JERK you dated before, open the eyes wider and be open-minded about anything. Okay.? You're poem was AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT.!
Good expressive poem about your feelings. Sincerely, Muriel
A side note: Guys like that are never worth it to be with! I am sure that new girlfriend will soon see that, too! Keep taking good care of you! I have a favorite quote I will share with you that reminded me of your writing here and may be helpful: Remove those 'I want you to like me' stickers from your forehead and, instead, place them where they truly will do the most good --
on your mirror!
~ Susan Jeffers
oh god! Thats so touching, I understand, theres LOTS of emotions inside, I agree, guys can be such a idiot sometimes, but theres no need for you to worry! He is not worthy for you, adnt hats all! Many guys just dont know they miss lots of good things, and they will regret for you, no need to be sad.
I agree with Cooki-Eater, make some new friends, that will make you recover quickly.
Thats a powerful poem, nice job!
Pros: Emotional poems like this are always good because they are an outpouring of the heart, which is all good poetry really is. No rhyme scheme here, but it flows easily without it. Usually, thoughts, like those, flow really well. The idea behind it is quite emotional and those emotions come through in your words and lines. I sense frustration, sorrow, and confusion. A good combination.
Cons: None.
Overall: I liked this poem. The emotions come through really well, and help convey your message. Good job :) Sorry you had to go through a relationship like this. They're never fun.
I may say this alot of heart-wrenching poems such as this one but GUYS can be such IDIOTIC, DISILLUSIONED B******S sometimes.
They're unable to see the best things that ever happened to them and end up throwing them away. It's like trading Chocolate milk for Soy milk. No offense to those who prefer Soy milk.
Yes I know that not all guys are like this, but most of them are, and if you do meet a good one, he's either gay or taken.
But there's hope my friend, there always is. Make new friends, the love of your life might be the shy kid in your Science class.
And, speaking from experience, son't spend all your time thinking about him. Go out with friends, enjoy some ice-cream. Then one day, whenever that day may be, sit and reminisce. Think about all the good times. Get the closure you need. And you'll be able to move on, if you haven't already.
And I forgot to add this because of my advice and slight rant, this poem was one of the most amazing pieces of literature I have ever read. And that is definitely saying something.
One Million and Infinity x3 Stars ************************* etc.,etc.,etc.
My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..
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