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A Poem by sarah

Was it real?
Did it really happen?
I don't know
I can't remember

Did I love you?
Did I give my whole heart to you?
I think I did
It's all a blur

Did I care what happened to you?
Did I comfort you when you were upset?
I think I remember that
Vaguely

Did I listen to your sweet words?
Did I laugh at your jokes?
Did I smile at your accomplishments? 
Did I listen to you when you were troubled?

Yes I do believe I did
I did a lot for you now thinking back
I just have one more question
If it wouldn't bother you

Where were you?

Where were you when I was upset?
Where were you when I needed your protection?
Oh that's right
You were off using someone else


© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
I can't really explain this poem just tell me how you like the poem

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I love it… Somehow, I can relate to it too. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this 'Accusing Session'..!!!!!

Good Shot..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love all the question marks and how you really don't remember all those things about him.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i just love this poem. Treachery, deceit and lies, all of them so easily shown and your grief so easily expressed. I love the last verse the most.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

written with the jealous sorrow of a true victim! It has that "you wronged me and I am hurt, but you won't get the pleasure of me showing you anything but..." down.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great peice.. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it very good. Good Job.

-SkyeBlanco-

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

question poems are some of my favorites. it literally is begging the reader for help, for some way out of this confusion. very provoking.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this poem. We always find out who is honest and true friend when we need help or someone to pick us up. I like the feel and emotion of this poem. I like the logic of the ending. Most of us must learn the truth the hard way. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

well the fact that it is seeming so far away, is probably a good sign. people can suck, but i still think you are going to find someone that wont.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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