Coming back

She couldn't believe it
She never expected it
Her heart was pounding
And shock covered her face

He stood there
Staring down on her
His eyes were filled with fear
And she knew he was trying to find a glimpse of hope

She stood before him
Completely speechless
Tears swelled into her eyes
They ran down her cheek

He pleaded with her
To forgive him
To take him back
To love him again

She looked up at his face
Rain surrounded them
Tears ran down her face
And then it happened

She placed her hand on the side of his face
She gently kissed him on the cheek
And then she shook her head and said
"No..."

She walked away and didn't look back
Because she knew if she did
She would fall apart
And give in

Author's Note

Again I couldn't think of an ending

Reviews

[Dream Slave]

Stanza before the last= Power

Overall very very enjoyable, with all the visuals, and all the raw emotion. Don't worry about the ending which you couldn't think about... the one you gave it pretty much gave the piece what it needed... the feeling of saying no, even when you want to say yes, for the sake of preventing something from happening again.

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

I love that kind of ending, empowerment!

[reminder]

I love the scene description! I feel like I'm there with them. Well done!

[Marie Harrison]

Good for her...perfect ending to me. Just saying no and walking away. Fun poem.