It all looks ok Ignore conflict Smile at pain Laugh at anger
It all looks black and white Drown the world out Make your own perfect world With no reality
That's all fine And fighting about that is pointless But sometimes facing the truth is what will save you Sometimes seeing things for what they really are is ok
The world isn't always black and white Sometimes you can't just hug and kiss away reality Sometimes you can't just ignore the conflict And hope it goes away
The world doesn't work that way It never did Never will...
Idk really where this came from, I guess I get tired of hearing that all we have to do is hug and it will all go away, if you hold a peace sign up everything wrong with the world vanishes. IT DOESN'T! sorry...ranting mode. Just let me know how you like the poem :-)
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very well-said for a rant. i like how you've put things very bluntly here, and the force of these words are just tremendous.
"The world isn't always black and white
Sometimes you can't just hug and kiss away reality
Sometimes you can't just ignore the conflict
And hope it goes away
The world doesn't work that way
It never did
Never will... "
sobering words! yet i must add this quote:
"That there's some good left in this world, Mr. Frodo, and it's worth fighting for." --T Sam from "Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers"
nice work!
You're right. It isn't black or white, but we can choose to focus on the gloom and doom or to focus on what is positive and good. I choose the latter. There will still be pain and disappointment, but as in the words of a favorite song, "Let there be peace on earth, and let it begin with me." (Sorry if that's too much of my own views) Seeing things for what they really are is certainly sound advice.
sometimes fighting about reality doesn't do anymore than trying to make the best of it would. that can be seen clearly from the world around us.
this world is always going to have problems, doesn't mean we always have to focus on them and make ourselves miserable over them, i did that for too many years and i'm done with it. all the worrying and pesimistic attitude in the world isn't going to solve any of it. so why not be happy?
You are correct in your poem. Problems will come. But better to allow them to come and go away. All things are give and take. To hold a friendship or return love to a Grandparent is the gift we give back for being thankful for the kind people in a life. A excellent poem. You made me think.
Coyote
I ADORES this poem! How much pain can be really fade away by a few hugs and kisses? No! We need to face what we face and try to solve it, and yes, not holding a peace sigh! Peace isnt made by a sigh, smile , hugs, or kisses, it need to be truly form! Yes, I am sort of very emotional with this peice, it gets my memories back of how I want to cover my pain and sadness! Nice written!
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