The world

The world

A Poem by sarah

It all seems so easy
Love
Peace
Comfort

It all seems so simple
Hugs
Kisses
Smiles

It all looks ok
Ignore conflict
Smile at pain
Laugh at anger

It all looks black and white
Drown the world out
Make your own perfect world
With no reality

That's all fine
And fighting about that is pointless
But sometimes facing the truth is what will save you
Sometimes seeing things for what they really are is ok

The world isn't always black and white
Sometimes you can't just hug and kiss away reality
Sometimes you can't just ignore the conflict
And hope it goes away

The world doesn't work that way
It never did
Never will... 

© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
Idk really where this came from, I guess I get tired of hearing that all we have to do is hug and it will all go away, if you hold a peace sign up everything wrong with the world vanishes. IT DOESN'T! sorry...ranting mode. Just let me know how you like the poem :-)

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very well-said for a rant. i like how you've put things very bluntly here, and the force of these words are just tremendous.

"The world isn't always black and white
Sometimes you can't just hug and kiss away reality
Sometimes you can't just ignore the conflict
And hope it goes away

The world doesn't work that way
It never did
Never will... "
sobering words! yet i must add this quote:
"That there's some good left in this world, Mr. Frodo, and it's worth fighting for." --T Sam from "Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers"
nice work!


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It does seem easy, but there's so much more to peace. Good job. This is one of my favorites from you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written. How true...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good

100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i enjoyed reading this. It also speaks the truth.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad reality poem. Nice rant.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True. Awareness has no correlation to prevention or any kind of help or action.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the subject you are writing about is very true and you have expressed your opinion on this subject through poetry very well. Keep up the good work :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well-said for a rant. i like how you've put things very bluntly here, and the force of these words are just tremendous.

"The world isn't always black and white
Sometimes you can't just hug and kiss away reality
Sometimes you can't just ignore the conflict
And hope it goes away

The world doesn't work that way
It never did
Never will... "
sobering words! yet i must add this quote:
"That there's some good left in this world, Mr. Frodo, and it's worth fighting for." --T Sam from "Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers"
nice work!


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very true. I will see other girls with dates and I hardly have one. It sucks.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

THis is amazing!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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