Dreams

I don't claim to be better
Bigger
More intelligent

I don't walk around
Telling people
How stupid they are

I don't claim to be perfect
In anyway
Shape or form 

I don't know it all
I still have many things to learn about
Many things left unknown

But something I do know
Something I know for a fact
Something I will stand behind till the end of my life

Is that you can reach for the stars
You can do anything you set your mind too
You can be whatever you want

But without God in your life
And in your heart
And in your mind
And in your soul

Then your dreams
Aren't worth much
The star your shooting for
Is less bright

You may think that God
Has nothing to do with your dreams
But by thinking that
Your dreams mean almost nothing

Author's Note

I didn't know how to end it lol

Reviews

[Abbie]

um im not really that religious but this is very good

100/100

[Calypso]

Very upbeat and that is good. Sometimes you need a poem like this. This should be the poem I use to describe my life.

[Undying Glory]

very well-written, and i sure agree with your ending here. no matter what religion one is, one can agree with that ending right here. good job!

[Alicia Schroeder]

shouldn't that tell you something..hehe, i'm not sure if you'd like that for an ending, but it was a great read, i like it..

[*skittlez*]

love it beautiful poem keep writing

[Brook Hughes]

Beautiful poem, the ending is awesome it brings out what you think about htis certain person!

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true in this poem. We need hope and faith to live in this world. I like the strong and positive feel in this poem. Dreams and great goals are what we need to be content in this life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Cynthia]

Me too! I think you have ended it well!

[OT]

I think you ended it well!! It leaves us to ponder the message you conveyed rather well in this great little poem!!

[KAREN]

Says it all, without God nothing will happen! Ended it just right!!