LOL - I don't use that often, but this called for it!
Haha! My god, this was funny, sarcastic, and dreadful (the happenings, not the poem!)
I love this for it's originality!
LOL, this really made me laugh! I think on some level we can all relate to this feeling, when just everything seems to go wrong. I just wish I have the sarcasm in me to laugh about the next time it happens!
Wish you a Merry christmas and a happy new year!
Take care, keep writing!
Sometimes all you can do is laugh. It sounds like that old country song "If it weren't for bad luck, I'd have no luck at all" Let's hope great grandma Cronin is right. She used to say, if things go wrong between Thanksgiving and the New Year, it was "Lucky" because it meant that the New year would be wonderful and prosperous. (She originally told me this when a drunk in a semi careened into my front yard, dodging 27 large trees, took out a front load bearing wall, causing my brand new stained glass window that I spent almost 2 years making, to crash into shards of every color, took out the main wet wall downstairs, so water everywhere and the semi finished up by totaling my car. This was Dec 24 at 11 am, I had more than 100 family member due at 5pm. It was horrid; but by heavens the next year was one of the best ever.)
Well, I hope you are having some lucky days! However, you have written a positive neidng, which makes it more positive to cover up some of the sadness in your poem. I know I am sounding comfusing, but that's how I feel.
You had a bad week. I hope it got better. A very sad Christmas story in your poem. At least a positive ending in the poem. I hope all things are alright and you had a good New years.
Coyote
LOL - I don't use that often, but this called for it!
Haha! My god, this was funny, sarcastic, and dreadful (the happenings, not the poem!)
I love this for it's originality!
LOL, this really made me laugh! I think on some level we can all relate to this feeling, when just everything seems to go wrong. I just wish I have the sarcasm in me to laugh about the next time it happens!
Wish you a Merry christmas and a happy new year!
Take care, keep writing!
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