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A Poem by sarah

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I can't help but laugh

Everything has gone wrong

But only a smile is on my face

 

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We have to shut off all the water

No showers for us this week

Well no one has to do the dishes

Plastic forks and knives are just as good

 

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The car is broken

Going on vacation tomorrow?

Well squeezing in a small car like clowns is fine

 

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Marry Christmas!

A new ipod

YAY!

It's broken....

 

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Want to call my friend

Oh wait my phone is broken

Oh well I guess a letter will do

 

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Everything has gone wrong

Nothing has gone as planned

Oh well I can't help but laugh at the many twist and turns

 

Marry Christmas everyone

And may you be blessed this new year

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
All and more of what's in this poem really happpened

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LOL - I don't use that often, but this called for it!
Haha! My god, this was funny, sarcastic, and dreadful (the happenings, not the poem!)
I love this for it's originality!
LOL, this really made me laugh! I think on some level we can all relate to this feeling, when just everything seems to go wrong. I just wish I have the sarcasm in me to laugh about the next time it happens!
Wish you a Merry christmas and a happy new year!
Take care, keep writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Sometimes all you can do is laugh. It sounds like that old country song "If it weren't for bad luck, I'd have no luck at all" Let's hope great grandma Cronin is right. She used to say, if things go wrong between Thanksgiving and the New Year, it was "Lucky" because it meant that the New year would be wonderful and prosperous. (She originally told me this when a drunk in a semi careened into my front yard, dodging 27 large trees, took out a front load bearing wall, causing my brand new stained glass window that I spent almost 2 years making, to crash into shards of every color, took out the main wet wall downstairs, so water everywhere and the semi finished up by totaling my car. This was Dec 24 at 11 am, I had more than 100 family member due at 5pm. It was horrid; but by heavens the next year was one of the best ever.)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, I hope you are having some lucky days! However, you have written a positive neidng, which makes it more positive to cover up some of the sadness in your poem. I know I am sounding comfusing, but that's how I feel.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Even on Christmas s**t happens. Cute poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's good to keep positive in the face of adversity!

Posted 14 Years Ago


You had a bad week. I hope it got better. A very sad Christmas story in your poem. At least a positive ending in the poem. I hope all things are alright and you had a good New years.
Coyote


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good attitude ~ you could be angry and all of that still would have happened ~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL - I don't use that often, but this called for it!
Haha! My god, this was funny, sarcastic, and dreadful (the happenings, not the poem!)
I love this for it's originality!
LOL, this really made me laugh! I think on some level we can all relate to this feeling, when just everything seems to go wrong. I just wish I have the sarcasm in me to laugh about the next time it happens!
Wish you a Merry christmas and a happy new year!
Take care, keep writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, well i'm glad you are keeping a positive attitude through all that! sounds like fun! lol!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Seriously?!? Jeeze, it's good if you can still laugh! So I'll wish you a Happy New Year where things will go better!!! ;) Keep laughing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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