I wish I had been there

I wish I had been there

A Poem by sarah

I wish I had been there
When you needed me the most
I wish I had been brave enough
To hold you when you needed me

I wish I hadn't been so afarid
To get close to you
During your time of pain
I wish I could change it

I wish I had been there
When your father
And best friend passed away
I wish I had helped you as best I could

I am truly sorry
I wasn't there when you needed me
I wish I had held you
And told you it would be ok

But I was to afraid
I am sorry I wasn't there
And I am sorry it can't be changed

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
just a regret I have

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sarah, you were there for him. i don't know of any way that you could have been there for him any more than you already were. you were a great and loyal friend to him, especially in his time of need. i know that that was also the time when it started to go down hill, but for the time that you were together- you were much better than he deserved.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Yes, I agree with Marie as well, regretting is all we have, and I have many regrets as well! Just go over it, and you you feel fine, you just need to support them now, and there will be nothing to regret again!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah, regrets are hard, but you can be there now! Great job on expressing your feelings!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yea i agree with marie harrison we all have those kind of moments when that happens at least they have the support by other people to now

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a deep expression of regret you expressed. Don't worry we all have them. At least they have your support now. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that's so sad@@@@@@ its really beautiful how you expressed your pain and regret.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You expressed your regret very well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sarah, you were there for him. i don't know of any way that you could have been there for him any more than you already were. you were a great and loyal friend to him, especially in his time of need. i know that that was also the time when it started to go down hill, but for the time that you were together- you were much better than he deserved.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Well written! You expressed that regret excellently in this poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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