I do believe you feel...

Hmmm...well well

What is this turn of events

I do believe I have had an affect on you

 

Interesting....

 

I do believe I have gotten under your skin

I do think that was a wince

I saw that glare you gave him

 

Funny....

 

I do believe I've cracked your shell a bit

I saw how angry you got

When I didn't pay you any attention

 

Quite amusing...

 

I do believe you are letting

Some emotion seep though your walls

You showed some envy

 

Odd....

 

You said you didn't care what I did

You said you didn't care what I said

Or who I spoke too

 

Fascinating...

 

You kept my texts

You shoved that boy out of the way

You tried to keep my attention

 

LOL!.....

 

I saw you wince at my sly comments to you

I saw your eyes grow angry when I turned my back

 

Boy I do believe you care

And all I have to say to that

Is thanks for the laughs

 

Reviews

[Dream Slave]

Sounds here like someone is trying to lie to themselves but can't, and it might not be the person to whom it is dedicated to but who is sending the message. Small actions can often be misinterpreted and used to play on others feelings. Beware that while you might feel this way, it is more likely a juggle move by this person... nobody likes to feel what uncertainty is, so they keep something around to remind them of a time where there was at least something for sure.

[Inci 2]

this is different and quite nice.. good work

[*skittlez*]

i like this alot very amazing

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

I like this a lot. Reads quite brilliantly!

[Dark Empress]

I like this a lot. It's a very good write. I love how you wrote this. Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I like the emotion of your words. Comes a time where we don't care anymore. I like the ending a lot. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[reminder]

Wow! One of the best pieces I have read. It totally captures the anger, jealousy, revenge, with a touch of regret. Bravo for structure and word choice! Well done!

[Cynthia]

Wow!
Great Write!