Second Chance

Second Chance

A Poem by sarah

I thought it would be different this time
I believed you
I believed that you would follow through on something
I trusted you

Why...?

Because I wanted to believe that you could
Really follow through
On one thing
Just one thing...

All I asked for
Was for a little time
Just a little time
With you

But no....

I believed you
I trusted you
But just like everyone else
You broke my trust and faith in you

I gave you a second chance
I told you to use it wisely
Don't think for a second
You'll get that second chance back


© 2010 sarah


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Second chances always runs into third ones! Good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I LOVE THIS POEM IT IS SO AWSOME


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A straight to the point poem. Sometime we must learn the hard way. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. it is wonderfully written. i hope all is well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What exactly happen? Is not like you without a aurthor note! I sincerly hope you are feeling fine!You have a powerful and strong poem here, nice written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow hun are you ok?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What happen?? Are you okay?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's hard to give second chance and when you do and your trust is broken once again it hurts like crazy! Great poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another strong, emotional poem. Good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, so very powerful and emotional; it's brilliant. I love that last line too, it's very strong indeed. Great job, keep it up!~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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