Second Chance

Second Chance

A Poem by sarah

I thought it would be different this time
I believed you
I believed that you would follow through on something
I trusted you

Why...?

Because I wanted to believe that you could
Really follow through
On one thing
Just one thing...

All I asked for
Was for a little time
Just a little time
With you

But no....

I believed you
I trusted you
But just like everyone else
You broke my trust and faith in you

I gave you a second chance
I told you to use it wisely
Don't think for a second
You'll get that second chance back


© 2010 sarah


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This happened to me with a very immature guy. See he would break up with me and then come crawling back to see if I would take him back, and I always did. Then one time I made my feeling get caught for a split second and then I took it away just like that. He never saw it coming. So in the end yes of course I was a little wounded but after that he was hurt more than I was. No guy should ever do that to a girl and no girl should ever go threw that pain.

Love the poem. Good job. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is good. I've felt this way all too much

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I suppose loads of people can relate to this. Nice poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate to this, it is greatly written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its sad that you have been hurt so much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like someone needs to learn not to trust those who have already hurt you once... specially if they seem not to care that they did. Tough lesson to learn but one that must be learned.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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fool me once shame on me, fool me twice shame on you...don't LET someone affect how you feel..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sad..I hope you're doing fine.
Great job on this

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm with Marie, once you know how a story ends, don't reread it hoping for a different ending.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute poem. I don't believe in dating the same person again. Once a book is closed, rather just read another book instead.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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