Wedding vows

As I stand here before our friends and family
and I look at you
My heart is filled with peace
And love and joy
I thank God for sending you too me
You are my best friend
And I can't wait to spend my life loving you
With all my heart
And I promise to not be perfect
I will make mistakes
And I promise you that we will fight
But I will love you forever
I give you my heart
I want to struggle through life with you
I will better praise God with you beside me
You bring the best in me
And I promise to stay faithful to you
To love
And honer you as my husband
I will try my hardest to be a loving wife to you
I look forward to spending my life beside you
And I am looking forward to loving you
Until death parts us
I can't describe my love for you in only a few moments
But I plan on spending my life showing you

Author's Note

This is for a contest and also it was a poem I wrote a while ago kinda as a writing challenge to me. Tell me what you think

Reviews

[KAREN]

Sounds like romantic wedding vows! Good job!! Excellent read!

[*skittlez*]

i love it. this is a very good poem

[Sunny Skye]

I love it.
This is a very good poem of love. Nice.

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this is a sweet poem of love~with a great mood of new love's bliss.
~you really expressed true love so idealistically-~wonderful poem :)

[Cynthia]

Such a great peice of writing!
I love the way you describe the wedding!
very sweet and romantic!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

aww thsi is so great. i love it

[Dark Empress]

It's very good. I like it alot. Thanks for sharing this piece. You can feel the love in every word. This poem is filled with love and happiness.

[Arsenic Nemesis]

B'aw, so very sweet indeed, I love it. Wonderfully romantic indeed, very cute, I like it. Keep up the good work~~

[Sarah Jane]

That is so romantic

[HopelesslyDevoted]

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