Wedding vows

As I stand here before our friends and family
and I look at you
My heart is filled with peace
And love and joy
I thank God for sending you too me
You are my best friend
And I can't wait to spend my life loving you
With all my heart
And I promise to not be perfect
I will make mistakes
And I promise you that we will fight
But I will love you forever
I give you my heart
I want to struggle through life with you
I will better praise God with you beside me
You bring the best in me
And I promise to stay faithful to you
To love
And honer you as my husband
I will try my hardest to be a loving wife to you
I look forward to spending my life beside you
And I am looking forward to loving you
Until death parts us
I can't describe my love for you in only a few moments
But I plan on spending my life showing you

Author's Note

This is for a contest and also it was a poem I wrote a while ago kinda as a writing challenge to me. Tell me what you think

Reviews

[HereWithoutYou<3]

It's beautiful. I am really like this poem. :)

[tynamite]

This is so sweet. I love it! I've favourited it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes time is the true test of love. Take more then passion. Need to care, help and support in the good and the bad times. I like the feel and gentle emotion of this poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tomi]

interesting... i like the last two lines best, that's what marriage is about.

[Calypso]

Awww

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"Honor"...spelling...other than that...beautiful!

[reminder]

Absolutely beautiful. Vows that read lyrically with your thoughts, feelings, and emotions!

[Brook Hughes]

This is beautiful! Some people can't wait to get married. I'm looking forward to it but I'm not ready yet! Great write!

[Rikkevi Rue]

nice. filled to overflowing with love.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully written!