Droplets

The gentle sound of rain
Makes my heart feel at peace
It inspires me

The sweet sound of rain drops
Falling off my roof
Makes me feel alive

Romance lives in the rain
Memories are made
By dancing freely in it

The rain creates so much within me
Makes me feel free
And able to do anything

The rain holds magic
Enjoy it while it lasts

Reviews

[just take a breath]

i feel the same way! its so annoying when people are like "ugh. i dont wanna go outside its raining!" its like, hellloooo! rain is amazing!

haha nice freeverse poem. i think it could use a few more detailed words in place of the words that are used so ofter like "romance, sweet, ect." just to add a little bit more uniquness but im not saying it was bad or anything. i use words like that all the time haha i try not to... but i do :)

[Dark Empress]

Great poem, love it. Thanks for sharing

[Marie Harrison]

Yes, it is so hard to get out of bed when it's raining! I love the rain. It really relaxes me. :) Great writing.

[Jeff]

Great imagery throughout this piece. Good job!