Droplets

The gentle sound of rain
Makes my heart feel at peace
It inspires me

The sweet sound of rain drops
Falling off my roof
Makes me feel alive

Romance lives in the rain
Memories are made
By dancing freely in it

The rain creates so much within me
Makes me feel free
And able to do anything

The rain holds magic
Enjoy it while it lasts

Reviews

[just take a breath]

i feel the same way! its so annoying when people are like "ugh. i dont wanna go outside its raining!" its like, hellloooo! rain is amazing!

haha nice freeverse poem. i think it could use a few more detailed words in place of the words that are used so ofter like "romance, sweet, ect." just to add a little bit more uniquness but im not saying it was bad or anything. i use words like that all the time haha i try not to... but i do :)

[Sarah Jane]

I love the rain too:) the rhythmic tapping is so calming. I like this poem its simple and its peaceful

[HopelesslyDevoted]

INSPIRATIONAL!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

i like a nice spring shower, that's peaceful! But thunder storms and lightening I can do without! your poem reminds me of the nice spring showers! great job

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there is something special about the rain..empowering write

[*skittlez*]

beautiful:)

[Rikkevi Rue]

beautiful...i fall with the rain on your roof...and i roll with the raindrops gently down onto your forehead and drip onto your chest and slide across your breast and slowly down your stomach...and mingle with the water of life...

see how you can inspire...!

[Robin]

that was beautiful ~

[Geralyn Miller]

I love rain too; every variety from gentle and soft to thunderous hurricanes. I grew up here in the desert and can remember when all of the Valley stopped working and came out to look at the rain. Rain inspires me.
This is one of your best.

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this poem so vividly and im many ways blankets the gentleness
of rain fall as it replenishes every day life (in women and children-
the cleansing of our minds, hearts and souls :)