Droplets

Droplets

A Poem by sarah

The gentle sound of rain
Makes my heart feel at peace
It inspires me

The sweet sound of rain drops
Falling off my roof
Makes me feel alive

Romance lives in the rain
Memories are made
By dancing freely in it

The rain creates so much within me
Makes me feel free
And able to do anything

The rain holds magic
Enjoy it while it lasts

© 2010 sarah


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i feel the same way! its so annoying when people are like "ugh. i dont wanna go outside its raining!" its like, hellloooo! rain is amazing!

haha nice freeverse poem. i think it could use a few more detailed words in place of the words that are used so ofter like "romance, sweet, ect." just to add a little bit more uniquness but im not saying it was bad or anything. i use words like that all the time haha i try not to... but i do :)



Posted 14 Years Ago


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A warm summer rain is very good. A cold winter rain is best with a hot drink and good company inside. A very good poem. A warm summer day and time is a good time in the rain. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I feel just like you do. There is nothing I love more then rain. There is just something beautiful to it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I LOVE RAIN D=
and its smell :)
and I love walking after the rain, when the street lights are blurry :)
Amazing !

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love the rain. It is pretty magical. Nicely written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Wow, that is a beautiful poem. This is one that I will remember for a long time!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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this was really innovative of you and really beautiful, loved this. this captures all the wonders of something we sadly overlook and most of us are not very thankful for. this was just superb work here, and keep writing like this, sure hope to see more of poems like this! awesome

Posted 14 Years Ago


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The rain can be relaxing if one just closes their eyes and listen to it! Very peaceful write!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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i adore this, i love rain as well. i agree with "just take a breath", you could try varying your vocabulary.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I like this poem. I feel the same way. I love the rain, it looks great when it rains and the sun's outside and then a rainbow comes out is perfect. Nature is beutiful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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awww is about all i can say

Posted 14 Years Ago


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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