Moment of peace

Moment of peace

A Poem by sarah

Sometimes I take a moment
A single moment
To really think

I sit in silence
I let myself breath easy
I try to clear my head

I listen to the gentle thump of my heart
I listen to the sounds around me
I watch the rain drip off the roof

In that single moment
The world stops
Everything around me stops

The constant talking
The never ending nagging
All the noise

It all stops....

In that single moment
My world pauses
And I get a single second of peace

I treasure that moment
Because it is my moment
Of peace 

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
Just something I was thinking about

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What a peaceful poem! How I wish I will get sometime like that! A Peace time, no one disturbing...... Your descibtio is really beautiful, oh god, your poem is so nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your poem reveals such peace and tranquility.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very good poem! I felt that peace when I was reading this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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mediation calms the soul and realigns us..what you describe is magical..I love the image of the world on pause as you take a deep breath..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, wonderfully written and presented. I love the line "I treasure that moment" it's lovely, mortal, I must say. Good job, once again, loving it~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, i seriously think this is the best you have written EVAR! i should have just told you that since again you are right next to me.
anway, your poems get better and better. we need to write a book together.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed reading this. Not the style I am used to reading but, being different is what makes it stand out.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a good poem. I really enjoyed it. I can relate to this poem and I like that. Great write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice i really like all of it you now

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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