Forever

For a some reason
The idea of forever
Has slowly drifted away from our minds

So many people think the idea of forever
Is silly
Stupid
Unrealistic

But that isn't true
Two people can love each other
Forever

If that's what they want
Then they can do it
If they try

People have this strange idea in their head
That making something last forever
Is easy

It isn't
It never has been
And never will be

Two people change over the course of time
But if you truly love someone
Then you push through the hard times
And you will make it to the good

Forever is not a silly fantasy
It isn't a silly childish dream
It's real

And you can have it
If you try
And work for it

Because forever is a beautiful thing... 

Author's Note

Tell me if this flows at all because I was really wasn't trying to make it flow I wanted this to have an impact on someone on here.

Reviews

[HereWithoutYou<3]

This should have impact on people, because usually people don't think about love as being a never dying experience. And they should. Some people search for it, but it's not a journey of searching it's about being strong. And caring for someone, through the bad and the good times. I love the poem, one of my favorites. :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[Marie Harrison]

I loved the flow of this poem. I'm jaded though. I think forever love is harder to find or accomplish now. It sounds nice though.

[.]

this entire piece is just lovely,
BUT~
"Forever is not a silly fantasy
It isn't a silly childish dream
It real"
~~~But this is an ethereal dream--that expresses our existence :)

;)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

a beautiful dream :)

[Dark Empress]

I like this. It's very meaningful and I love it.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully wriiten with great flow!

[KAREN]

Beautiful poem! Wedding vows almost!!

[Cynthia]

Beautiful! That flows well.
Forever is the most beautiful thing in the world! I agree that,
but life is sort of... sad? Nothing is forever, this poem is such a great one!

[Diomaz]

Very nice, thankyou for requesting this it was very meaningful :3

"Forever is not a silly fantasy
It isn't a silly childish dream
It real "

> My favourite, although there is that typo which I must point out 8D "It real>It's real"

But it was still a fantastic poem :D

[Dream Slave]

Guess what you say is true... still nothing lasts forever... there is death to think about. Everything that begins have an ending whether we like it or not. So it is just something about life, something natural, something that has to be embraced.