Circle

Whenever a life is taken
A new life is being created

Whenever pain is being caused
Someone is happy for the first time

Whenever someone is crying
Someone else is smiling

Whenever a relationship ends
A new one begins

Life is a circle
Whenever their is a negative
There is a positive following behind

 

Author's Note

This is sorta not what I usually write about but never the less it's true

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

yep sure is true. thought this was really good, quite an interesting topic to write about. short yet really poignant work. i couldn't help but notice you wrote "knew" instead of "new" (was that intentional?)
"Life is a circle
Whenever their is a negative
There is a positive following behind"
amazing words!

[Chelsea]

I really enjoyed reading this poem, thanks for sending along the read request. I really like your idea for the topic "circle of life". i think it's thought about alot but never really written about. so thank you for voicing it!
I loved how simple the lines were but your got so much meaning in them!
It's comforting the thought of a new life for one lost, sort of restoring the lost :)

[KAREN]

Yeah, it is true and well written! I couldn't have explained it this good!!

[Kelly M.]

Yes, so true! It's so great to know that even in the negatives there's positives!

[Shannon Math]

It sure is true! I loved it! :)

[PaperHearts]

What an intriguing way to look at things! I thought that this poem was very insightful, and full of maturity and positivity. I liked the fact that you took something so conceptual and wrote it in such a simple way. It definitely provoked thought and made me see things in a whole new light. :) There was just one mistake that I noticed, which was that 'their' should be 'there' in the last stanza. Other than that, I enjoyed this a lot.
~PaperHearts

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

There is a balance in the world... the bad things help us appreciate the good.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

totally! i like this, the positive and the negative! way to show both sides of things.

[Norma M Sutton]

And a good thing to remember.