In a matter of minutes

In a matter of minutes

A Poem by sarah

A second ago a woman cries
For the choice she has made

Two seconds ago
A young man jumps for joy because he free
From responsibility

Three seconds ago
A child's life was ended

4 seconds ago
A murder was committed
A murder that is excused

A minute ago
A mother made a choice
She will never forget

Two minutes ago
A young man walks off
Without a care in the world

Three minutes ago
A child lost all hope
Lost all rights

All in the matter of minutes  

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
Sorry about making the guy seeming like a jerk but most young guys act like this when it comes to their gf's having abortions

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Painfully true. Many young me skate through an unwanted pregnancy with little or no thought. We need to do a much better job of educating the young about sex. Take the stupid "abstinece only" crap and use it to light a fire under the morons who advocate no sex education. They are as bad as the Taliban for wanting society twisted to their perverted version of religion.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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your poetic voice is growing! more cohesion in the lines and the message is like an arrow through the heart. I feel this is one of your most profound poems.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I learn many years ago. Minutes are very important. Words can kill a friendship and wound a like forever. You gave many strong example of time where life and death is being decided. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow! Great Poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Painfully true. Many young me skate through an unwanted pregnancy with little or no thought. We need to do a much better job of educating the young about sex. Take the stupid "abstinece only" crap and use it to light a fire under the morons who advocate no sex education. They are as bad as the Taliban for wanting society twisted to their perverted version of religion.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i dont want to sound rude, sarah...but imust say that this is your best...the last 3 stanzas just took it to another level altogether. Initially, the first few lines were a little vague. but once i read the complete piece it all makes sense now.
narrating one's pain and another carefree attitude has been done in a wonderful manner.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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