Am I real?

Am I real?

A Poem by sarah

Do I exists?
Am I real?
If I am
Why can't anyone see me

Am I a ghost?
For only few can see me
But not for long
And only when they want to

What am I?
I see people look at me
But shake their head
As though the thought of me existing is silly

Sometimes it feels like people walk through me
Sometimes it seems like they literally can't see me
Hear me
Touch me

Am I real?
I can't tell anymore
I can't scream anymore
Or yell for attention

I must simply not exist

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
though this was an interesting idea let me know what you think

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Easy to feel invisible. Can be hard to understand. At my age I like private and quiet. Young people need noise and the feel of being alive. A very strong poem. Sometime need to find a place where you feel wanted and needed. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Easy to feel invisible. Can be hard to understand. At my age I like private and quiet. Young people need noise and the feel of being alive. A very strong poem. Sometime need to find a place where you feel wanted and needed. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I will say it's kinda creepy, really how will ayone feel when no one see you but you still feel like you exsist??
Great Poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eerie, there are many who feel unnoticed by the world, living and dying quiet unseen lives. The grey people, they make me sad.
If people don't notice you, find new people, rock the boat.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very creepy- i like it! again... very awkward you sitting her while i type this..... this has to be stopped.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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