Here I go again

Here I go again
I am trying once more
To get you
To trust you

Here I go again
Putting my heart on my sleeve
Hoping
Praying

Here I go again
Trusting you won't let me down
Hoping you'll follow through
That you won't disappoint me again

Here I go again
Praying
That it will be different this time
That you won't break my heart

Here I go
One last time
Last chance

Reviews

[serpent]

here i go again
killing
warnings from the past
living
memories of what we shared.


remind me of video clips from "turn the page."
"if i ever get to live again, i will make the exact same choices"...
no matter if situations and people are wothy or not...there is always a "one last time".... some choose to acknowledge it..some dont...

your words took me for a walk down the memory lane..
outstanding work!

[tynamite]

I love this poem. I'm sure many people can relate to this. You've conveyed the emotions well. I've favourited it. I can imagine someone wearing their heart on their sleeve.

[Sunny Skye]

wow! i've been their and it worked out well. Great poem i really like it is really really good.

[Kelly M.]

One last chance... as usual you did good! :)

[Cynthia]

wow!!! What a great poem! A true amazing poem!

[PaperHearts]

Flawless. I feel like you really excel when you write with your heart, and when you write with such simplicity, and I thought that this was a real example of that. The wording was simple, and the format was simple, yet it carried a real sense of depth and maturity, and it was within that sophistication that I found beauty. I agree with Alicia in saying that you could have used punctuation to emphasise particular points in the piece, or to make it a more effortless and flowing write, but apart from that, this was wonderful. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[Alicia™]

An absolutely beautiful poem... It's very relatable. I get the feeling that the girl has been cheated on here. The wording is very simple, and yet, you conveyed the feelings perfectly. It would've been better if you used punctuation though... But I still loved it! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. I could feel the concern and the desire for a better ending. It is hard to open doors after learning pain. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote