Crap!

CRAP!
I still melt at the sound of your voice
I still yearn to see you smile

CRAP!
I still seek your approval
I still try to impress you

CRAP!
I haven't forgotten you
I haven't let you go

CRAP!
It still stings
My heart still aches

CRAP!
You still mean a lot to me
CRAP
CRAP
CRAP!

Author's Note

A ranting poem

Reviews

[Dushyant Thadani]

I guess you've ranted all your feelings through and through, and done it very very well. Plus the best part is that even though its street, it still has a tendency to move us. For me, it made me laugh because of Crap, but besides that I feel the same.

[JanieB]

Oh..get that anger out there! Well done.

[Star Bright]

I love it! It sounds like my situation at the moment. I liked how there wasn't a lot of words, because it speaks out just the way it is.

[MissWordSmith]

I LOVE THIS!
It was plain, but it needed that absolute plain-ness to it to make it HEARD.
I think I relate to what you wrote too, which isn't necessarily good here! :P
There's something so unique and accepting...Something so DIRECT about this!
Can't explain really! Anyway, this one is definitely going to favorites! Keep
Writing !
100/100

[Geralyn Miller]

Funny and relatable, we have all been there at one time or another.

[Marie Harrison]

I can feel the frustration you have for yourself for your desires, your feelings and your yearnings for someone who abandoned you. Go easy on yourself. There will be others to take the place of this one. It's normal to have the desires, feelings and yearnings for a formal lover. You wouldn't be human without there. Wonderful ranting poem.

[SilentSKY]

Omg this is so relatable! This is so true :) I loved it, and found nothing wrong with it. :)

[Robin]

so watcha gonna do ..

[Sweets]

Great work! :D

[Misty Blue Eyes]

love this.. i like the crap part