Falling

I'm ready to fall
Fall hard
Without a safety net

I feel myself slowly leaning forward
Over a cliff
But I can't help myself

Your sweet words
Bring such comfort to me
They bring a smile to my face

And when I am with him
I can feel myself starting to fall
And I start to lose control

I am falling
And I am falling hard
I have no control

I am falling
Hopelessly
And I can see heart break waiting for me at the bottom...

Author's Note

I have a crush on this guy he is soooo sweet and the greatest guy out there, but I said the same thing about my ex. And this guy is super super busy and hardly has time to breath, but he makes time for me. Which is amazing! and I am just afraid I am going to fall and break

Reviews

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don't be afraid - don't take the experiences from your past and let them taint your future..the moment is now..live it..the only line I wish wasn't here was the last..the poem is a 'letting go' and the end..is a 'holding back' . Who cares what is at the bottom..that's the future - in the moment your falling ..and that's what matters..

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is really good sarah, i like the concept, the description is really creative. :)
nice!
have fun today k? ;)

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

lean is exceptional
The sense of the fall is nicely portrayed-a sprouting word weaver with noticeable clout budding.

[Wolfwind Words]

A great poem! The hope for tomorrow is crafted from the fears we overcome today. Life isn't without risk, if you truly want to be the master of your own destiny.
And if a fall happens. That's when those around you, friends, family, ectra, that have seen you go down, they'll be there to help pick you up.

Wolfie

[Coyote Poetry]

When we fall. Real hard to stop. We can get lucky and find paradise or find a heart brake. A very good poem.I believe can' t be afraid. Take no chances. Have no fun. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i love this poem very good

[Adrien Hupp]

i know what you mean....cuz i have a crush on ny best friend and i don't want to fall.good poem:)

[Wondering Mind]

The risk is always there, but don't let the fear keep you from taking a step forward, by now you should know that you can always take a step back before reaching that cliff.

[Rikkevi Rue]

you might...but the only way to live life is right straight at it i believe. Your write reflects your fears and your intimidation at the possibility of a repeat, what about your dreams of how it COULD go...? I like the write but maybe you can learn from it