Falling

I'm ready to fall
Fall hard
Without a safety net

I feel myself slowly leaning forward
Over a cliff
But I can't help myself

Your sweet words
Bring such comfort to me
They bring a smile to my face

And when I am with him
I can feel myself starting to fall
And I start to lose control

I am falling
And I am falling hard
I have no control

I am falling
Hopelessly
And I can see heart break waiting for me at the bottom...

Author's Note

I have a crush on this guy he is soooo sweet and the greatest guy out there, but I said the same thing about my ex. And this guy is super super busy and hardly has time to breath, but he makes time for me. Which is amazing! and I am just afraid I am going to fall and break

Reviews

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don't be afraid - don't take the experiences from your past and let them taint your future..the moment is now..live it..the only line I wish wasn't here was the last..the poem is a 'letting go' and the end..is a 'holding back' . Who cares what is at the bottom..that's the future - in the moment your falling ..and that's what matters..

[Zane]

This was a very good read. :) Great job.

[Dushyant Thadani]

Many people feel this Sarah. But you have been so very descriptive and shown everything so beautifully. I gotta say you nailed this one. Great job Sarah

[Geralyn Miller]

Fourth verse, first line, if you change "him" to "you" ; you will improve the continuity of the piece.
Falling in love is easy, but sometimes its so hard. You are definitely an accomplished writer; keep going, explore the world outside of personal.

[JanieB]

This is real good Sarah.

[nono]

Very awesome, and yeah those lil crush things haha, I don't know they never work how you expect them to, so I've notice and seen. I like it very strong, it's always nice to read about something true, Just amazing. Keep up the great work I can't wait to read more!

[Marie Harrison]

Very intesting that you are predicting your future, yet you continue to move forward. Very cute poem. It's really funny to me. Sometimes we have to test the waters. Maybe he will be the one to fall this time for you?

[Cynthia]

You don't ever need to be afraid! All the things you've gone through is passed, don't ever look back. OK, My words aren't very helpful cause I never expeience anything a same! Sorry if I hurt you....
But if you are me, I hate feeling like that too, just like you! Relateble feeling

[SilentDreamer]

Yeah, relatable. :) Good luck with that and him, hope it works out well.

[Calypso]

I hate feeling like this. There are time when I feel nothing is going right, or ever will.
Anyways I like how emotion filled your poem was.

[Cheyenne]

Falling is a hard and soft thing.. Falling to hard is the thing that can get us in trouble. I try not to let myself do that for fear of rejection or disappointment GREAT poem