Tired of waiting

Tired of waiting

A Poem by sarah

I wanna feel something again
I wanna feel affection for someone
Someone new
Someone who I can love

I wanna care for someone
Someone who cares for me in return
I want to flirt
And to feel some small sparks again

I just want to feel again!!!

Anything
I am tired of feeling numb
I am tired of feeling afraid
I am sick of watching you move on

And I am tired of waiting
Waiting for you to come back to me
Waiting for you to realize you love me
Tired of waiting for you....

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
I am tired of waiting for my ex to realize what he lost so I am not going to wait anymore!

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A beautiful poem. I like the flow of the poem. Life may give us lemons but we must hold on to hope and dreams. I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful poem...nicely therapeutic. You go girl...move on!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good for you

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aren't we all tired of waiting. I'm tired of everything....Just people sometimes don't know when to shut up and back off, but I mean that's why you have to sit there and wait for what you want. You can never go out and get everything you want. I think we're all tired of waiting for something.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this. Very well written Sarah.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i hated when guys did this.. chin up hun...

Posted 14 Years Ago


awesome poem sarah! but just to let you know.... i met him... i don't think he is ever going to be smart enough to realize how much he actually lost when he lost you. but i also know what you mean about waiting...ugh....waiting sucks!

Posted 14 Years Ago


You go girl! Some men don't realize what they have lost for many years, then they are filled with regret. Sometimes moving on is the best revenge. Find your own contentment within yourself.
Your piece skillfully expresses feelings so many of us have shared; without wallowing in self pity. Good write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good! Let go; why wait for wait for some one realize what they have right in front of them? Feel again, live again. Beautiful write.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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