My perfect kiss

We walked slowly in the mist of the night
We held hands
His sweet eyes gazed down at me
My heart skipped a beat

We slowly strolled down the lane
The Christmas lights glittered brightly
All the way down the lane
There were bright lights

As we walked he stopped
And paused for a moment
Our hands were still intertwined
He smiled at me

I gazed up at him
Curious as to what he was doing
All of a sudden he pulled me close to his body
He wrapped his arms around my waist

And for a moment
He just stared at me
Like he was taking a picture with his mind
He moved some hair out of my face

Then he bent down
And sweetly pressed his lips against mine
A cold breeze blew through
But neither one of us felt it

His kiss was sweet
Tender
But full of passion
And romance

It started to rain gently
But neither of us cared
I ran my fingers through his hair
He gently lifted me slightly off the ground

But then all of a sudden
Something happened
Something I hadn't expected
Something terrible
I woke up

Alone....

Author's Note

I have never been kissed and I am 17 *sigh* but this is how I picture my first kiss. I hope it happens just like this :-) hey a girl can dream right! haha

Reviews

[quinfinn]

this is so beautifully touching and sweetly romantic that i was in the moment and feeling your emotion. sweet 16 and never been kissed, it will come along. prince charming is out there somewhere and he will ride up on his white stallion and sweep you off your feet. what a lovely poem !

[misha]

This is sweet, sometimes a first kiss takes awhile to happen, so don't worry, because when it does, it will be perfect =). Keep up the great work!

[tynamite]

Sounds nice.

[Audrey Howitt]

So tender and romantic. I hope it happens for you this way too!

[OT]

a great portrayal of a first kiss - very sweet and well written too - nice!

[Maya Storm]

Ohhhhhh I really like this... so innocent, so sweet, it's beautiful. I hope that your kiss is wonderful when it happens

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww. Very sweet and romantic. ^^ sad end..though.. but i loved your poem!

[Brett Forsythe]

Very well written! You did a really good job.

[Celeste21]

What a beautiful sweet dream... Where are these men in real life? We need them...