My perfect kiss

We walked slowly in the mist of the night
We held hands
His sweet eyes gazed down at me
My heart skipped a beat

We slowly strolled down the lane
The Christmas lights glittered brightly
All the way down the lane
There were bright lights

As we walked he stopped
And paused for a moment
Our hands were still intertwined
He smiled at me

I gazed up at him
Curious as to what he was doing
All of a sudden he pulled me close to his body
He wrapped his arms around my waist

And for a moment
He just stared at me
Like he was taking a picture with his mind
He moved some hair out of my face

Then he bent down
And sweetly pressed his lips against mine
A cold breeze blew through
But neither one of us felt it

His kiss was sweet
Tender
But full of passion
And romance

It started to rain gently
But neither of us cared
I ran my fingers through his hair
He gently lifted me slightly off the ground

But then all of a sudden
Something happened
Something I hadn't expected
Something terrible
I woke up

Alone....

Author's Note

I have never been kissed and I am 17 *sigh* but this is how I picture my first kiss. I hope it happens just like this :-) hey a girl can dream right! haha

Reviews

[quinfinn]

this is so beautifully touching and sweetly romantic that i was in the moment and feeling your emotion. sweet 16 and never been kissed, it will come along. prince charming is out there somewhere and he will ride up on his white stallion and sweep you off your feet. what a lovely poem !

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Wonderful Kiss , wonderful poem ... you will be Kissed , alot ... I love your romantic style .... we alll live of dreams :) ... beautidul Sarah ... I will keep reading you , Yossi

[Seashell]

This was a wonderfully romantic poem, and sure it will be exactly like this if it's with the right person, and not just the first kiss will take your breath away...hopefully every kiss. My first kiss was at the age of 16...it wasn't the right guy..and it was eeeeyuck..haaa. Then when the right guy came along...my first real boyfriend...it was mmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Thanks for share
Babs xx

[Dushyant Thadani]

This dream sounds so beautiful... I love the way you've described it, and its like such a story... Begins with an alternate reality and ends with a reality... I hope this dream comes true and you have a great kiss in the future... :)

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a tender romance here.. a beautiful moment that brings love to life in a kiss.. And yes.. a girl can dream.. hope your wondrous dream awakens just as you wish!

[CyndiR]

A sweet description of the imagination of the first kiss! So sweet and romantic, the whole twist in this poem is great, how the dream and woke... Emotions are expressed so greatly! A touching piece of write! I believe your prince charming will soon be here! Always look for the future!
Lovely Write!
~CyndiR

[Time.]

I hope your first kiss happens just the way you wrote it, beautiful and touchingg! :)

[Barbara Lynne]

been there ... done that... :) beautiful write ... and you have a beautiful imagination...I pray that your first kiss will be just as you imagined...thank you for reviewing my poem...

[alexlessah]

Of course girl can dream, i'm very sorry it will happen one day. This is very romantic though and I love it!

[A Risen Heroine.]

Awesome Write!

[nishantshah2381]

romantic and vivid in imagination