My perfect kiss

We walked slowly in the mist of the night
We held hands
His sweet eyes gazed down at me
My heart skipped a beat

We slowly strolled down the lane
The Christmas lights glittered brightly
All the way down the lane
There were bright lights

As we walked he stopped
And paused for a moment
Our hands were still intertwined
He smiled at me

I gazed up at him
Curious as to what he was doing
All of a sudden he pulled me close to his body
He wrapped his arms around my waist

And for a moment
He just stared at me
Like he was taking a picture with his mind
He moved some hair out of my face

Then he bent down
And sweetly pressed his lips against mine
A cold breeze blew through
But neither one of us felt it

His kiss was sweet
Tender
But full of passion
And romance

It started to rain gently
But neither of us cared
I ran my fingers through his hair
He gently lifted me slightly off the ground

But then all of a sudden
Something happened
Something I hadn't expected
Something terrible
I woke up

Alone....

Author's Note

I have never been kissed and I am 17 *sigh* but this is how I picture my first kiss. I hope it happens just like this :-) hey a girl can dream right! haha

Reviews

[quinfinn]

this is so beautifully touching and sweetly romantic that i was in the moment and feeling your emotion. sweet 16 and never been kissed, it will come along. prince charming is out there somewhere and he will ride up on his white stallion and sweep you off your feet. what a lovely poem !

[Jvl narasimharao]

You poem tells that all westerns are not free and licentious.You are a virgin and you have your dreams.Your poem is as delicate and tender as you.You are a bud

[Star Wolf]

This is very tender and romantic. Yes, we all do have our dreams, nothing wrong with that. And sometimes dreams do come true!

[M.E.Lyle]

Sarah is a great name, it's right out of the Bible. This, I suppose, is what every girl dreams of. I don't know, I'm just a dumb guy. It flowed smoothly like fine wine, or maybe a cold beer made of the finest grains. Don't drink either of those by the way, you're much too young. Is there a handsome prince out there for you? I don't know. Will you find true love someday? I don't know. You have a wonderful gift, that I do know.

[LadyNaida]

Oh, by the way, thank you for being the first to submit a poem to my contest. Yay!

[LadyNaida]

This is very beautiful! Is full of passion and emotions. I love it because I am a romantic full. Is not a dream, I believe one day you will get your kiss from your prince charming. :)

[Dark Beauty]

GREAT IMAGERY,WONDERFUL WORDS CONVEYING THE MESSAGE LIKE THIS ONE ALOT!1

[light and ashes]

I hope that your first kiss is just like this :] Well done, this is a beautiful and sweet poem.

[tk]

wow! amazing imagery. hope that someday your first kiss will happen like this!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Almost pre-view of social acceptance and the wanting that lay's within all of us, well done, great read.

[Dalrymple]

Great poem. Waking up alone is only for a time. But thinking about it makes you a great writer.