Broken loyalty

Broken loyalty

A Poem by sarah

He was my best friend
I trusted him with my life
My secrets
My heart

He was my friend
Nothing more
Nothing less

I never asked for much
Just trust
Loyalty
And honesty

He came into my life
When I needed a friend
He told me to trust him
Like they all do

But in this case
I believed him....

Then all of a sudden
He turned out to be like all the rest
He was a lire
A fake

He wasn't my friend
He just needed someone to vent to
He just needed someone to complain to
He just needed me so he could talk about the girl he liked

But when I needed him
He turned his back on me
He made me look like the bad guy
Like it was all my fault

As they always do...

Why do I always believe that I won't end up hurt
Because so far
All I have ended up with is a broken heart
And broken trust

I am starting to believe that trust
And honesty
And loyalty
Don't even exist

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
This is about my ex best friend Tyler who I trusted with all my heart and soul now he is just like all the other guys who hurt me

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I'm sorry to hear that.
Maybe you should try to look for another friend, I'm pretty sure that someone might be nice =/
You will absolutely find someone who you can trust :)
Just forget about your past =3
and try to find new friends..? o_o
Good luck! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


I am sorry for this, but honestly, I have this same kind of situation before too! Now, our relationship is totally ends, well, but of course, is not the matter of a boy, just, I don't know how to explain.
This is a really nice poem, I just love the story behind the poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'm sorry to hear about your loss, people of both sexes can be such idiots and treat us with so much disrespect, its awful. A very well written expression, thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


that is just something that happens all the time

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well maybe there wasn't wrong with your trust, perhaps he just wasn't ready to be worthy of trust yet? That role does require character. What an honest write, I felt as if I saw your soul vividly through this write. Admirable quality in a writer.

Posted 14 Years Ago


There are good people in this world. We will have few friends we can trust with personal information. Take years to create a real friendship. Need to celebrate victories and losses to built a good friendship. A sad poem. A test of friendship is when you are in need. Who will come and take care of you. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw, thats sad. I'm sorry he done that to you. I've been in the same position as you, many times over. Good write, I could feel the emotions.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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a story retold a thousand times...

Posted 14 Years Ago


good poem, its good to write about things and get them out. i'm really sorry that this happen to you. but don't let it effect the rest of your life forever. for every one person out there that is out to hurt you, there are so many more that want to help you. don't let your anger about the people who hurt you distract you from meeting new people who will brighten your life. :)
see ya soon.
angie

Posted 14 Years Ago



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