Wish

I wish I could forget what you did to me
I wish I hadn't have given you my heart so quickly
I wish I could forget the pain you caused

I have so many wishes
Hard to chose the one I really wish would come true

But if I had one wish
Only one wish
And i knew it would come true

It would be...

I wish I had never met you

Author's Note

This is for a contest

Reviews

[JanieB]

Nicely done.

[Shannon Math]

Nice. It's short, direct, and AWESOME!

[Alicia Schroeder]

Deep, great write..

[Sunny Skye]

I like it very good. Good Job. Short but good.

-SkyeBlanco-

[Norma M Sutton]

Short, simple and direct.

[Meghan Rose]

this makes a lot of sense to me right now. people who love too much are easily hurt, but it's who we are

[Undying Glory]

now this sure called out to me, kudos on that part! the feelings betrayal in your words are really potent here, and i sure like this a lot. nice work and keep the goods coming!

[Calypso]

This is sad. There are times when we all wish we could take back time.

[Brook Hughes]

Good poem! I love the ending, " I wish I had never met you." I feel the same way with one of my ex-friends. Keep writing!

[KAREN]

Excellent expression of feelings!