A Friend

Life has it's up's and downs

Sometimes it seems like too much to bare

We find it difficult to stand

 

But then we find that friend

That one person who makes you want to go on

That person who makes you smile through your tears

 

They hold you when you're alone

Dries your tears

Speaks to you when the silence gets too much

 

They make you're darkness turn to light

They make you feel like life isn't as bleak as it may seem

They heal your broken heart

 

That person knows you

That person loves you

That person understands you

 

Hold on to that person

Because as much as you need them

They need you just as much

 

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

this was wonderful work here, well-written as usual. i just love this because you sure have captured the essence of true friends, not people who just think "You scratch my back and I'll scratch yours". great work!
"They hold you when you're alone
Dries your tears
Speaks to you when the silence gets too much

They make you're darkness turn to light
They make you feel like life isn't as bleak as it may seem
They heal your broken heart"
i just love those words! nice job here!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Wonderful, absolutely love it. I know for a fact that I'd be nothing without my friends, they all mean the world to me. This is fantastic; keep it up!~

[Cynthia]

this poem speakes for many of us! Friends are always what we need and need to live with!
'Hold on to that person
Because as much as you need them
They need you just as much'
I so love this last staza! As long as we need our friend, they need us too!

[*skittlez*]

love it

[KAREN]

Words that speak to me! Good job!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great Poem, We all need good friends!

[Mauricio Montoya]

I think thios is a very wonderful piece, nice work.