An Action

An Action

A Poem by sarah

I always wondered what love was

When I asked I got so many different answers

Answers that only left me even more curious

 

I was told that Love is a feeling

Or love is an emotion

Or love is just simply a myth

 

But when I finally experienced love

I finally knew what love was

 

It's an action

You express your love with your actions

The small things you do for each other

The small gestures

 

It was far more than a fuzzy emotion

A sweet feeling

 

It was you and I acting in love

Doing things for each other because we simply wanted to

Simply making time for one another

 

And I look at you now

And I hope that I have shown you enough love

Because you show me you love me everyday

 

That's what love is

An action

The little things

© 2010 sarah


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You have depicted love as something grand.

Posted 14 Years Ago


yeah, love's about doing..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very good poem, thanks for sharing :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love is when we stay with someone in the good and the bad times. Time is the true test of love. Your poem is true also. Love is give and take. Being kind and not allowing the world to stop a true love. Last line is facts. "The little things"
A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love this poem, exploring the action form of love. I think love can't be contained. But I love your look at love as an action. Beautiful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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that just makes me smile...love is a doing word..

Posted 14 Years Ago



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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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