If only you knew....

I wonder if you know...

If you can tell...

do you?

 

Do you know that I still care?

Do you know that I never stopped?

Do you know that?

 

I wonder if you realize how much I cared

I wonder if you know that I honestly loved you

I wonder if you know that seeing you sad kills me

 

I wonder if you ever think of me

I wonder if my face ever crosses your mind

I wonder if you still care

 

Do you know....

That when your hurt I am hurting as well

Do you know...

That seeing you depressed makes me depressed

Do you know...

That my affection for you hasn't died

Do you know....

 

I wish you knew...

That your face is always in my mind

I wish you knew...

That your voice is a song in my ears

I wish you knew...

Your smile lights up my world

I wish you knew....

 

I was hurt....But I healed

I cried...but my tears dried

I was sad...But I was lifted up

And now what....

 

I don't know...If only you knew...

Author's Note

This is an older poem which I wrote a while back I am just curious to know what u think

Reviews

[Dream Slave]

This is sad... I can take sad poetry though. The thing is when a person leans too much on another they lose power, self esteem, and their worth just sinks down into a hole. Easily manipulated by that one person they look to as the wall to hold them up. Listen to "Opiate" by Tool. Just that the example in that song is religion.

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Wonderful, very emotional and deep; beautifully written. I really loved all of the questions and the "Do you know..." stanza. Lovely, mortal~

[Undying Glory]

wow this was really great. i just loved this poem, you've really done well with this one.

"I was hurt....But I healed
I cried...but my tears dried
I was sad...But I was lifted up
And now what....

I don't know...If only you knew..."
loved those words!

[Coyote Poetry]

After a deed is done. Most people don't look back. A lot of good questions were ask in the poem. A very good poem.
Coyote

[Cynthia]

I love this! Actually, I think it's sad love for somehow.
Truly shows you love the guy in this poem, or else you wont feel what he feel, LOL.
That's a amazing peice of write!

[MagicWriter]

wow I really likes this. What I like most is that it seems to take you on a time line. A time when you were hurt and wanting something that wasnt there to how how you moved forward. Beautiful job sarah!