If only you knew....

I wonder if you know...

If you can tell...

do you?

 

Do you know that I still care?

Do you know that I never stopped?

Do you know that?

 

I wonder if you realize how much I cared

I wonder if you know that I honestly loved you

I wonder if you know that seeing you sad kills me

 

I wonder if you ever think of me

I wonder if my face ever crosses your mind

I wonder if you still care

 

Do you know....

That when your hurt I am hurting as well

Do you know...

That seeing you depressed makes me depressed

Do you know...

That my affection for you hasn't died

Do you know....

 

I wish you knew...

That your face is always in my mind

I wish you knew...

That your voice is a song in my ears

I wish you knew...

Your smile lights up my world

I wish you knew....

 

I was hurt....But I healed

I cried...but my tears dried

I was sad...But I was lifted up

And now what....

 

I don't know...If only you knew...

Author's Note

This is an older poem which I wrote a while back I am just curious to know what u think

Reviews

[Dream Slave]

This is sad... I can take sad poetry though. The thing is when a person leans too much on another they lose power, self esteem, and their worth just sinks down into a hole. Easily manipulated by that one person they look to as the wall to hold them up. Listen to "Opiate" by Tool. Just that the example in that song is religion.

[HereWithoutYou<3]

It has a lot of emotions.

[JanieB]

Very sad.

[Saisha]

its beautiful...
really pure and deep emotions have been very well portryed.
I can really connect to it on another level.

[Amanda_Rose]

its sad yet beautiful. there's always that one person in your life that makes you scream out in pain and happieness simultaneously. great poem.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Their is always that someone we wonder about and wonder if they are thinking of us too, lovely peice.

[Lime-Eater]

I this is one of the best poems I have ever read! I'm not just being nice, but I truley love this. It is VERY sad, but it's VERY good. I just wish I would have wrote it! Your a very talented and great writer! I think you should keep writing

[MissWordSmith]

heart wrenching
from beginning to end, something i can relate to again
if only he knew...
very direct, very emotional, very real
i loved this
it was hurt, and vulnerability at its purest

[Calypso]

This is wonderfully terrible. The topic is sad.

[Dark Empress]

I like it...sad, but I like it. It has lots of emotion in it. A very deep poem, indeed. Thank you for sharing :)

[vido.]

i love the use of repitition throughout this piece. very deep, very sad, yet very beautifully written. kudos!