I don't need this

It was all fake

Fake smiles

Fake conversation

Fake concern

It was all an act

 

You know what I did

You know you dissaprove of me

I know once I turn my back you will bash my name

I know you don't care

 

I don't need your fake pity

I don't need your fake worry

I don't need any of you

 

You know what I did...

And you know what I wouldn't change a thing

I would galdly do it again

I don't care if you dissaprove

 

Yes I am young but at least I fought for what I belived in

At least I wasn't pretending to be somthing i'm not

At least I was honest about my feelings

 

Don't pretend to care

I don't need your fake humor

I don't need any of this

I loved him and you know what I am not sorry for it

 

So stop trying to convince me other wise

Don't pretend you forgot what happened

Don't peretend to be my friend

Just go home....

Reviews

[HereWithoutYou<3]

I love the end. " Don't pretend to be my friend." I get where you're coming from. It has happened to me over and over again. People trying to be my friends when they don't think of me as anything. Trying to find out my secrets and thoughts to just make fun of me later. It's a great poem I really enjoyed reading the power in between the words.

[Calypso]

I feel sorry for you. It seems like your heart is always broken. I hope you will find the love of your life in 2010.

[Inci 2]

sad poem.. but really nice..

[KAREN]

Straight form the heart! Good job!!

[Cynthia]

that's such a great poem!
A outstanding ending!

[Brook Hughes]

I love this poem, especially the part where you said,"Yes I am young but at least I fought for what I belived in
At least I wasn't pretending to be somthing i'm not
At least I was honest about my feelings.

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem with a direct message. Sometime we don't want to hear other people opinions. I like the ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Rikkevi Rue]

ok tigress! You have the strength of a bull in your writes! I love that trait. questions and statements...they weave a tapestry of attention and intention...the see-saw back and forth is the give and take of a poets craft...If you reverse the statement your reader will reach toward YOU...this write reaches toward your reader...which means it could (but doesn't necessarily) make your reader withdraw...give it some thought...you have the force, if you perfect the arts of wielding it you'll be insanely killer! (i mean in a good way-LOL)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Like the way you put across the clarity of mind..!!! Good one..!!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Love the fifth stanza...a good write....keep up the good work.