every step

this is a brand new song from us

i see you in the distance so much further than before
with ever step you take i can not see you anymore
and as the days grow weary and as my eyes grow tired
im beginning to lose count of all the times you wept inside
running away was never so inviting as you've offered it today
beneth this silver lining is a city filled with grey
people just passing by still pretending to know the way
where offering this silence is a promise that they've made
a secret to be kept until the living lead they way
this will be taken to the grave


i see you in the distance so much further than before
with ever step you take i can not see you anymore
and as the days grow weary and as my eyes grow tired
im beginning to lose count of all the times you wept inside
clasp in the name of the one who brought us out of torture and out of pain
delievered us from evil and let us begin again
but oh thats not good enough for us we need revenge
this selfeshness is leading us to places wet and sad
where idols leave us wondering alone with living dead
until the earth can swallow us instead

i see you in the distance so much further than before
with ever step you take i can not see you anymore
and as the days grow weary and as my eyes grow tired
im beginning to lose count of all the times you wept inside
consume me now i feel you yes i feel you
but ive yet to figure out the secret and that promise i chose to
live with out
i need you yes i need you can you try to get me out of the grave
im digging for myself

i see you in the distance so much further than before
with ever step you take i can not see you anymore
and as the days grow weary and as my eyes grow tired
im begining to lose count of all the times you wept inside
this will be taken to the grave

Reviews

[Melissa Rose]

Awesome! I would love to hear with music, I think that it would be truly captivating. The possiblities for it are endless. Good work!

[gravitylava]

this is a really good song. To just read it kind of makes it less appealing, but put to music it would rock.

[deeps]

This is so wonderful. I enjoyed this write alot! Thought it was very well written.

[DELETED]

wow I reallly like this xD