Ashley

hey Ashley you are so beautiful        
you are so sweet
you could take my breath away
you are so beautiful
you are so sweet
you could take my life away


everytime i talk to you
you always know what to say
you always know how to make me okay
you've never turned your back on me
and if i had to tell you how i feel
i'd say this to you
you make me feel like everything will be fine
you make me smile and feel alive
everything you say makes my day


hey Ashley if i told you a secret
would you know when to keep it
would you help me stand when i can't
will you be my shoulder to lean on
will you stand by my side
do you know when im broken


so many things left to say
i think i'll say this to you
your eyes could light up the sky
your smile will take the pain away
your laugh will cure this sadness
your tears will fall down my face


hey Ashley you are so beautiful        
you are so sweet
you could take my breath away
you are so beautiful
you are so sweet
you could take my life away

hey ashley if i can just tell you this
i'd say no words can thank you enough
for always being there
you never once judged me
you always care for me

so many things left to say
i think i'll say this to you
your eyes could light up the sky
your smile will take the pain away
your laugh will cure this sadness
your tears will fall down my face





 

Reviews

[C.A.B.S.]

It was a very sweet piece but I also thought it was a bit cheesey. I think you could go into better detail of how you feel about that person whom who show that you love to dear. Over all it was a sweet write.

[Undying Glory]

really heartfelt and touching. i don't have a girlfriend but i know too well how it feels...really heart-wrenching. an excellent poem